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: : I am new in the writing field and this is the first thing that I have wrote. Give me some feed back, please. : : You have been hurt : : Lied to, cheated on : : I know the pain you go through : : My heart was black and cold : : I wanted no one : : But you are more than I deserve : : Your heart aches with deceit : : You mind struggles to decide : : Should you trust me? : : Should you believe in me? : : Should you love me? : : I have been where you are : : Turned my emotions off : : To protect myself : : Now you are in my life : : Showing me how to love again : : My heart ached with deceit : : My mind struggled to decide : : Should I trust you? : : Should I believe in you? : : Should I love you? : : You want to love me : : But you are not over her : : It will take time for you to heal : : From your open wounds : : Your heart will heal : : Your mind will calm : : I do trust you, believe in you : : I do love you : : I will wait for you : Needs work. Overall from a scale of 1-10. I would give it a 3. You kenw what you were trying to say so you should have said it. I had no ideal what you were talking about.

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